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3分作文： Sometimes, things that are not successful still have some value. For example, the Columbia space shuttle was not successful but was valuable. The Columbia disaster it was really sad that the Columbia blew up and the astronauts died. I saw it on my TV and cried. They found pieces for days and days all over Texas. But it was valuable like that Challenger that blew up a long time ago because it makes us want to get it right. We want to fix it so it doesn't happen again and so regular people can go to space like that kid from N*Synch tried to do. And so we will keep going to space and getting satellites for satellite TV and spying and stuff. And so NASA and the President are going to go to Mars next. Something not successful can still have value because we will go to space even if theColumbia disaster happened. 【點評】 這是一篇讓人哭笑不得的跑題作文，能拿3分也足以說明SAT作文給分還是很寬松的。

(E)and needless words should be omitted

(E)has increased in discussion in the media

The video above, of Owen\'s talk at Pop!Tech, is truly remarkable and filled withhope. Please watch the video above and let us know what you think.

下面是該作文題的幾篇考生作文，并逐一附上評析。

A和D都是名詞結構，但A的名詞不是“人”，所以不能和前面3個表示“人”的名詞平行。

如果一個序列從第二項起

中轉服務器解析終端或者歐洲服務器發送過來的數據包，保存相關的數據，然后把數據重新打包發送到歐洲服務器或者終端。

14. Observers of democratic elections have said that their role is at once thrilling because of its importance but its limitations are still an aggravation.

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Yeah, and I\'ve learned something. (是呀，我長了不少見識。)

例：The contents of this book are more interesting than those of that book.

簡短的兩問兩答，用了一般過去時和現在完成時，這種語境是經常出現的。如果半年只學一種時態，是難以進行真實交際的。

Although Gertrude and Hamlet are fictional characters, the way Shakespeare portrays them is representative of real human behavior. Many people let themselves be influenced by what happens to them, like Hamlet, and these people have difficulty finding happiness. On the other hand, some people, like Gertrude, react in a more positive way to any event that occurs and thus achieve a certain level of personal happiness regardless of what happens. This contrast proves that our reaction to events rather than the events themselves is the critical factor for achieving happiness.

develops a point of view on the issue and demonstrates competent critical thinking, using adequate examples, reasons, and other evidence to support its position

C、D和E中，not only的位置都是有問題的，C的not only并列的是動詞wastes而不是從句；D的not only并列的是沒劃線的名詞their children's time；E的not only并列的是表手段或方式的by itself。因此，都不能和but also＋that從句構成平行。

develops a point of view on the issue, demonstrating some critical thinking, but may do so inconsistently or use inadequate examples, reasons, or other evidence to support its position

比如，優先使用examine a case而不是the examination of a case，優先使用investigate something，而不是conduct an investigation of something，等等。

(C)at age sixty-five years old

Obama mania hits the catwalks of Rome

　　Mania over President Barack Obama has reached the catwalks of Rome, where a top haute couture designer showed off a kaftan emblazoned with his face and another dedicated a gown of \"hope\" to his wife Michelle.

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