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3分作文: Sometimes, things that are not successful still have some value. For example, the Columbia space shuttle was not successful but was valuable. The Columbia disaster it was really sad that the Columbia blew up and the astronauts died. I saw it on my TV and cried. They found pieces for days and days all over Texas. But it was valuable like that Challenger that blew up a long time ago because it makes us want to get it right. We want to fix it so it doesn't happen again and so regular people can go to space like that kid from N*Synch tried to do. And so we will keep going to space and getting satellites for satellite TV and spying and stuff. And so NASA and the President are going to go to Mars next. Something not successful can still have value because we will go to space even if theColumbia disaster happened. 【點評】 這是一篇讓人哭笑不得的跑題作文,能拿3分也足以說明SAT作文給分還是很寬松的。
對于SAT作文的字數,官方沒有給出具體的標準。
正是在這個夢想支持下,她度過了生命中最艱難的時刻,最后被一個音樂制作人慧眼識珠,出版了她的唱片從而獲得了成功。這個例子證明Jewel有talent(a critically acclaimed voice and songwriting skills),但更重要的是她有motivation,所以她才獲得了成功。
As the Humboldt quotation suggests, it's not the events that occurs in our lives but rather the way we react to these events that most affects our happiness.
Gertrude, for example, responds to the death of her husband, the King, by remarrying shortly after his death.
他的名言可翻譯為:
下面我們介紹一篇獲得滿分的敘述形式的文章: Think carefully about the issue presented in the following excerpt and the assignment below.No one is contented in this world, I believe. There is always something left to desire, and the last thing longed for always seems the most necessary to happiness. Marie Corelli, A Romance of Two Worlds Assignment: Do you think that people are capable of finding happiness or are they always searching for something beyond what they have? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and example taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observation. 優秀范文: Happiness means different things to different people. My sister is happiest when she performs onstage in a play. My best friend is happiest when he is pitching a perfect game on the baseball field. People find happiness in all sorts of ways, but that doesn't mean they stop searching for something more. Finding happiness and continuing to pursue other goals are not mutually exclusive propositions. Instead, both of these activities can work together to motivate you, as I've learned from my own experience. When I was in middle school, my favourite class was art and I was disappointed that the class period was so short and only twice a week. Although I was happy during those times, I really missed art during the rest of the week. However, knowing that art class was approaching helped motivate me to pay attention in the rest of my classes because I knew that my "reward" would soon follow. Once we were in the art room and I was immersed in painting or sculpting or drawing, I found incredible happiness in the creative process and carried this feeling with me throughout the remainder of the day, yet I wasn't fully satisfied with this small amount of exposure and I wanted more. I did appreciate the happiness I had, but at the same time I was looking something beyond that. So I begged my parents to let me take art classes after school and on the weekend, I managed to convince them I'd be happier if I could have this additional creative time. Taking more and different art classes outside of school exposed me to a variety of different techniques and media that I never had time to explore in school, like metal-working, wood-carving and print-making. I grew even more enthusiastic about the visual arts and found even more happiness than I could have imagined thanks to these additional classes. By wanting something more, I was able to find additional contentment and inspiration and I truly was happy with the results. Yet I didn't stop reaching for other goals. I really wanted to have my artwork displayed for the public, so I worked very hard for several years to develop a portfolioand I achieved my goal last year with my first solo show at a local gallery. This success gave me much happiness, and I'm already planning additional shows. Being content with my art makes me happy on a regular basis, but this doesn't keep me from wanting something more at the same time. For me, striving for additional goals adds to my happiness, so I don't see the two actions as contradictory at all. Instead, searching for something beyond what you have can help you to appreciate and enhance whatever it is that makes you truly happy. 【點評】 這個作文題問的是,人們能否尋找到快樂,或人們是否總不滿足于眼前的快樂? 在第一段,作者首先說明對不同的人來說,快樂意味著不同的內容,人們可以找到快樂,但不會就此停止。
An essay in this category demonstrates developing mastery, and is marked by ONE OR MORE of the following weaknesses:
【作者觀點分析】
正式考試時,考生看到作文考題那一頁,和本書上面的形式是一模一樣的。
同時,字體不要太小,否則讓人看起來很費勁。
這個例子可以是小說里的一個人物,歷史上的一個人物或事件,甚至是報紙里報道過的一些人物或事件,也可以是自己親身經歷過的事情等等。
An essay in this category demonstrates developing mastery, and is marked by ONE OR MORE of the following weaknesses:
文章結構清楚,段落過渡自然(如第三段的第一句話起到了承上啟下的作用,即My sister is a contrast to Jewel's effective combination of talent and motivation.)。作者具有一定的駕馭語言的能力(如wither from neglect等),句式結構多變,該簡單就簡單,該用筆墨的地方就用筆墨,而且全文沒有文法上的錯誤。
德國近代著名的自由主義政治思想家、教育家、外交家、比較語言學家和語言哲學家威廉馮洪堡(Wihelm von Humboldt,17671835),倡導“學術自由”和“教學與研究相統一”的精神。
收集在本章的10篇優秀范文,都是SAT滿分作文的典范之作,其中第9和第10篇系筆者的學生最近參加SAT考試的滿分作品,筆者一字未改,只是為了讓同學們一窺SAT滿分作文的真實面貌。
按照這個套路,任何作文題的開始都可以迎刃而解了。
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