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烏魯木齊托福是烏魯木齊托福培訓學校的重點專業，烏魯木齊市知名的托福培訓機構，教育培訓知名品牌，烏魯木齊托福培訓學校師資力量雄厚，全國各大城市均設有分校，學校歡迎你的加入。

烏魯木齊托福培訓學校分布烏魯木齊市天山區,沙依巴克區,新市區,水磨溝區,頭屯河區,達坂城區,米東區,烏魯木齊縣等地,是烏魯木齊市極具影響力的托福培訓機構。

但是不可以矯枉過正，字體過大或間隔太大都會讓人一眼看出你是為了增大篇幅而有意為之，這樣反而弄巧成拙。

二次方程（quadratic equation）：未知量的最高次是2次的方程。

4th July is an important date in American history.

應該寫成The fourth of July...

19 couples took part in the ballroom dancing competition.

19對選手參加了交際舞比賽。

應改寫成：Nineteen couples took...

60％ profit was a reported．

據報道有60％的利潤。

應改寫成：Sixty per cent profit...

1345 kilograms force was applied at the center point of the bar.

試驗時，在桿的中點加了1345公斤力。

可改成When tested, a force of l345 kg was applied...

(D)was absent so often that I was afraid she might be

　　那么新的一年到了，就讓過去的都過去吧!新的一年，走出家門，看看外面的世界，說不定你就會有意外收獲。多花時間在兩個人身上，用心的經營你們的愛情，從此以后，讓幸福常伴你左右，真愛永遠都不嫌遲。要幸福的愛，即便是世界末日!

　　1. Leave the past in the past

　　When you meet someone new, leave any negative feelings or past heartbreaks just where they should bein the past.

　　2. You won’t meet someone new in your living room

　　Well, maybe a cute guy will deliver your new sofa, but chances are you’re going to meet someone by getting out there and trying new thingsonline dating, taking a class, etc. Tell everyone, especially your married friends, that you’re looking to meet someone and ALWAYS go to parties. Because you truly never know who you’ll meet.

　　3. Give the guy a chance

　　When you were 20 your list was “he must be tall, dark and handsome.” Try going against type. It just might be a perfect fit.

　　4. Look at blind dates like a first date

　　Many women met their husbands on blind dates, and you can too! If you’re not sure you want to sit in a noisy restaurant, go out and do something fun. One of my friends went to a baseball game, and she and her date each brought a friend. They had a blast and got married one year later.

　　5. Time is on your side

　　Take your time in getting to know your guy and don’t feel in a rush to meet his children or have him meet yours. It starts with the two of you. Make sure this is someone you want in your life.

　　6. Someone to come home to

　　When you’re ready to move in together you will discover how wonderful it is to come home to the one you love. Be prepared for some give and takefor example, over which of each others’ belongings stay or go.

　　7. Your wedding, your way

　　Now you’re in love and it’s time to have your wedding exactly how you want it. Remember it is all about you and the man of your dreams. Whatever you want is the way to go.

　　8. Happily ever after can happen to you

　　It’s never too late to find true love. We did, and you can too!

第三個句子劃線部分是插入語，表附加細節；

However, these emails are actually created and sent by attackers;

但是在實戰中，有時候不說反面，第二、三段都說正面，也有令人驚喜的地方那就是，攻擊力集中，說服力大大增強。本文就是一例。

(E)Harder than German Shepherds, the bite pressure of wolves

比如：我的論文寫得怎樣啊？（問話的肯定是想聽表揚才問啊！）

(D)was absent so often that I was afraid she might be

(C)in addition the development of better breath control

練習題

赤身裸體和一身西裝也就是一件衣服的區別;誰又會在乎是不是真的有一個量詞在前面呢?

A, rather than B, is…

(A)and omitting needless words

靈活變化句子結構注意過渡詞語及標志性過渡句子的使用等，

同樣道理，排除C和E。

第二段在介紹哥倫比亞航天飛機失事這個例子的時候，也犯了和5分作文相同的錯誤，就是沒有把筆墨的重點放在這件事給NASA帶來什么教訓上，只提到了一句thespace program now know what is wrong，僅僅說他們知道錯了，不夠具體，應該在此處加上一些具體細節（specific details）。

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