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(E)and aggravating because of its limitations

在全文結束，作者提到，追尋更大的快樂可以讓自己更珍惜眼前的快樂，并使這樣的快樂程度更強。

demonstrates variety in sentence structure

(B)created nor did he profit

謝謝無名道的開導，心中有所觸動。有幾樣確實是可以行動的了

:)

11. The influence of Roman architecture is perhaps even more evident in theUnited States than for either Europe or Asia.

The abolitionists, such as Harriet Beecher Stowe and William Iloyd Garrison,were heroes in their own time. Before the Civil War, people in all sections of the country thought that African Americans were animals and treated them as such. During the reform period of the Jacksonian era William Iloyd Garrison began to publish his abolitionist newspaper The Liberator. In this newspaper he demanded that the African American slaves be set free immediately, without any compensation to their owners. Because his view on slavery was against the。

但是，由于文章在舉例時沒有把握好筆墨的重點，導致失分較大。

(C)are not highly motivated or who don't have at least moderate intelligence instead

第四段是作者的反思，就是歷史上有很多英雄的例子，但是后人根據自己的想象不停地對那些英雄事跡進行改寫，而死人是無法給自己辯解什么的，所以電影或自傳書中的英雄形象多多少少會被人為的東西剝奪光輝，這也是我們為什么很難找到一個真正英雄的原因。

在造句時, 較高級詞匯 如能運用貼切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一個，也會使你的作文顯示出與眾不同。

二、結構造句 與眾不同

在造句時,既要使句子生動，又要使其簡明扼要。

1、使用與人不同的表達方式，特別是提倡打破漢語句子結構的束縛而重組的句子更受歡迎。

1)唐山曾在二十世紀八十年代發生過一次大地震。

A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.

B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.

大多數同學使用了there be結構，這是對的，但是B句卻摒棄了常見句式。另辟蹊徑而使用了 主語 謂語 賓語 結構，且使用了terrible,hit/strike這樣的詞匯，更是難能可貴的。

2)你八月十五日的來信我今天早晨收到了。

A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.

B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.

2.使用一些強勢句式，如強調句、感嘆句、倒裝句等，增強語句的表現力。如：

3)阿福救了我妹妹。

A: Ah Fu saved my sister.

B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.

4)我們看到莊稼和蔬菜長勢喜人很是高興。

A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.

B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.

3、句式多樣,復雜得體。在寫作中應避免使用相同長度的相同句型，而應注意句式的變化，如長短句結合，簡單句、并列句與復合句共用，還可使用簡化句等;一些較復雜的結構如獨立主格，分詞結構等也可使用。下面的表達中A句簡單句多，而且多處使用 there be結構，顯得單調、乏味，而B句就有自己的特色。

5)這是一套25平方米的住房，住房里面有臥室、有洗澡間、有廚房;臥室里有床、沙發、桌子和椅子等。

A: It\'s a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.

B: It\'s a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.

三、布局謀篇 獨具匠心

在寫作中，我們可按時間、空間或其它邏輯順序來安排各要點，同時為使主題突出,結構嚴謹，我們應注意學習和使用交代句以及段落的主題句等。在布局謀篇上，NMET2002范文堪稱典范。請看：

Opinions are divided on the question.

60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

Building new leadership to work toward stopping the disease
組建新的領導層抵抗疾病。
The leadership retreated into secretive mode
領導層又退回到了秘密模式。
I will help you locate crf leadership
我會幫助你找到前線組織的領導層

【新生的英語表達】

是考查動名詞的平行，所以在above all后面必然是一個帶有-ing結構的成分。所以，首先把A、B和C排除。在D和E中，唯一的區別是D使用了is，而E使用了are，因為主語部分有三個成分，應該是復數，所以排除D。

(B)The bite pressure of wolves, which is harder than German Shepherds

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