新聞標題：2018內江sat培訓

內江sat是內江sat培訓學校的重點專業，內江市知名的sat培訓機構，教育培訓知名品牌，內江sat培訓學校師資力量雄厚，全國各大城市均設有分校，學校歡迎你的加入。

內江sat培訓學校分布內江市市中區,東興區,威遠縣,資中縣,隆昌縣等地,是內江市極具影響力的sat培訓機構。

2018內江sat培訓

在把自己的觀點表明后，接下來就該要舉例來證明自己的觀點了，這個例子可以放在正文里來詳細說明，但在第一段還是最好提到下面即將要舉的例子，這可以說是全文的thesis statement。

根據以上講解，同學們可以按照這個套路來練習了。

【點評】

Assignment都是問號，考生必須就問題本身來做出正面回答，這個回答就是你的論點，而接下來要舉的例子就是你的論據。

這樣，一個完整的結束段落就形成了。

Let's consider Julius Caesar, a hero in his own time but regarded, thanks mainly to Shakespeare's play, as a man with mortal failings: vain, superstitious and arrogant. He can no longer be thought of as a hero, but just a man who came to prominence for his actions at a certain point in history. He has his place in the history of the Western world and his face on ancient coins, but scarcely fits our need for a hero for all times whom we can revere.

2018內江sat培訓

2018內江sat培訓

可以寫成In conclusion, we can learn something helpful from failures或者說In conclusion, failure can teach us something helpful等等。

下面是該作文題的幾篇考生作文，并逐一附上評析。

The goal of the Vietnam War was to prevent Communism from taking hold in that country. Many at the time believed that if Vietnam became Communist, so too would the rest of the region. When we left, the country fell to the Communist party. However, advancements in military training came out of the conflict. We learned the value of "special forces" and developed new tactics to fight in environments where tanks were less efficient than air strikes. These lessons better prepared us for modern warfare.

另外，在舉例結束后，作者把自己的thesis statement重復了一下，以加強該例子和中心論點之間的聯系（Surely, this is a valuable thing to come from a horrible failure）。

5分作文：

但是，由于文章在舉例時沒有把握好筆墨的重點，導致失分較大。

你也可以這么開始這篇文章，比如成功的人受到公眾的羨慕，有鮮花掌聲，金錢地位，但失敗的人受到公眾的唾棄，甚至是親人的蔑視等等。

● SAT作文的開頭

有人認為其實是培根寫出那些有爭議的作品的，也有人認為是一個寫作班子寫出那些作品的。

內江sat培訓學校成就你的夢想之旅。學sat就來內江sat培訓學校

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