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課程標(biāo)題：2018年成都sat職稱培訓(xùn)班
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成都sat培訓(xùn)學(xué)校分布成都市錦江區(qū),青羊區(qū),金牛區(qū),武侯區(qū),成華區(qū),龍泉驛區(qū),青白江區(qū),新都區(qū),溫江區(qū),人民東路,人民南路,紅牌樓廣場,天府廣場,都江堰市,彭州市,邛崍市,崇州市,金堂縣,雙流縣,郫縣,大邑縣,蒲江縣,新津縣等地,是成都市極具影響力的sat培訓(xùn)機(jī)構(gòu)。
反正意思不能和中心論點(diǎn)沖突，但在具體的遣詞造句上應(yīng)該靈活點(diǎn)。
但是，文章的核心還是要側(cè)重于在失事后美國有關(guān)方面是怎么樣處理這件事的，怎么樣進(jìn)行深刻反思的，做了哪些事來檢討自己的工作，從中得到了什么樣的教訓(xùn)等等。
在這里，我們不再討論主題句的重要性，而是讓大家注意，在SAT高分作文中，有這樣一種寫法，即在一個段落中，說一個意思，然后用兩三句支撐。
【寫作語言分析】
從句意上看，這里應(yīng)該是個名詞結(jié)構(gòu)的平行，平行的成分有三個，都應(yīng)該是名詞。
（D）mode＜average＜median
B中出現(xiàn)了SAT的大忌being。
（B）$30
Bingo!
4分作文： Some people would say that something that is not successful does not have any value. I would have to disagree with this statement. Sometimes, things that are not successful still have some value. For example, the Columbia space shuttle and the Vietnam War were not successful, but they had value. Thus, it is true that something not successful can still have value. For instance, the Columbia disaster. Columbia was destroyed in an accident when the shuttle tried to re-enter the atmosphere. This accident was a horrible failure and many people were very upset by it. The value, though, comes from the new way in which we now look at things. Because of Columbia, the space program now know what is wrong. Hopefully, they will change it. Vietnam is also an example of something not successful. We went to Vietnam in an attempt to get rid of communists. Thewar went on for a while, but we were not able to win. Many soldiers were killed and the public were very angry about the whole thing. Soon there were many protests across the country and college students especially became active against the war. By the time the war was ended the people were very upset with their country. These two examples show that something not successful can still have value. As we have seen, both Columbia and the Vietnam War were not successful. Yet, we got something of value out of them. 【點(diǎn)評】 開始段落把中心觀點(diǎn)講出來了，并且也有thesis statement。
最后一段就兩句話，顯得頭重腳輕。
這也是為什么，同樣是寫個人的成長，有的人就可以拿滿分，有的人卻不行。因?yàn)椋覀冏鳛榭忌v的故事，必須要與名言有關(guān)才有可能拿高分。
第二段，作者提到Jewel曾經(jīng)非常落魄，還舉了一些細(xì)節(jié)比如她一度以自己的車子為家（she was living in her car），但是她堅(jiān)信自己成為一代歌手的夢想會實(shí)現(xiàn)。
（C）－5
Without our past, our future would be a tortuous path leading to nowhere. In order to move up the ladder of success and achievement we must come to terms with our past and integrate it into our future.
順便提一下，在英文中，有些動詞的ing形式已經(jīng)相當(dāng)于一個形容詞了。雖然它們是從動詞派生過來的，但文法上也傾向于把它們看作是形容詞。比如interesting和exciting，已經(jīng)沒有人會想到它們是從動詞派生的了。本題中的thrilling和aggravating就是這種情況。
對于我們考生，這暗示著什么呢？有兩個非常容易被人忽略的事實(shí)：
(C)either in music or literature
還有個比較嚴(yán)重的情況，要引起我們的重視。
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