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5分作文：

如果只舉一個例子，對很多中國學生來說，文章恐怕寫不長，說服力也不夠；要是舉太多的例子，限于篇幅，可能每個例子很難寫得深刻，同時也顯得雜亂。

1. 如果你無法“深刻”，那么你可以“流暢”。

而且答案已經給出來了那就是“決不人云亦云”。

綜合全文看，作者以自己在藝術道路上的成長經歷來證明一個道理，即人們可以從眼前的事情中找到快樂，但卻不會滿足。

比如有一篇老托福的作文題，問的是在家吃好還是在外面吃好？

【作者觀點分析】

作文拿個0分事小，弄不好還落個學術剽竊的罪名，甚至會左右自己能否去美國深造。

總體而言，該文采用narrative的方式，但是在開始段和結尾，作者采用的是議論方式，闡述自己的觀點。

第三段是有些問題屬于“兩難問題”，無法回答“是與否”；對這樣的提問，聰明的聽眾往往會沉默，此時無聲勝有聲。比如：妻子問丈夫“我美不美？”（說美吧，不是事實，說了也被懷疑拍馬屁；說不美吧，又怕被打，只好沉默了）

結束段落只有兩句話，雖然講的內容都符合SAT作文要求，但只有上半部分，沒有下半部分即“發揮”。

were animals and treated them as such. During the reform period of the Jacksonian era William Iloyd Garrison began to publish his abolitionist newspaper The Liberator. In this newspaper he demanded that the African American slaves be set free immediately, without any compensation to their owners. Because his view on slavery was against the common belief of the population he was not received well. Throughout his life he was given multiple death threats and one of his abolitionist friends was killed. Harriet Beecher Stowe was an abolitionist after Garrison's time, but she was received in much of the same way. After the Fugitive Slave Act of 1850 was released, she wrote the book Uncle Tom's Cabin. It was a story of a slave living in the South and the cruelity of his owner. The inhumanness of the owner caused many southerners to ban the book in anger, but at the same time it brought the terrible act of slavery to the light. Many northerners used this book as a weapon against the South's

2. Even if in the past we made mistakes，讓步狀語從句，放在句首表示讓步；

Mary Pettibone Poole, Collected Words.

評判英雄的標準

這個故事，可以是你自己的故事，也可以是你周圍人的故事，也可以是文學作品或是歷史中的一個故事。

劃線部分是對歷史事實的客觀陳述，能體現作者廣泛的閱讀面與精準的記憶。

范文五

對剛才這個問題，考生要明確自己的觀點到底是什么。

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